Dream Deep

Blast, so we're back to the whole giving meaning to the story? I understand what you're saying about improving the final impression DD, but I ... guess I'm struggling with ...

Didn't I tell you I'd get here? It just took... a few... weeks... month... *becomes suddenly and extremely interested in the ceiling* Ah well - but I'm here with a ...

Forgive me for the brevity of this, Yoyo, but I've only got a slight moment of freedom here. This was good because it was simple and so extremely emotive. Most ...

Consider, for a moment, your characters. Now maybe you have entire notebooks dedicated to that one perfect protagonist... or maybe you have absolutely nothing on any of your main characters ...

*shifty eyes* This could get confusing, nickname-wise. Hmm - but you're 'Dreami' and I suppose I'll stick to 'DD' for all intensive purposes. Or we could play the roles of ...

Lovely, Nate. And the 'tropics' are a neat background - the golden/tan-ish one you had up before was apparently the source of some confusion to a friend of mine: "What's ...

^ 8/10 because I can't quite tell the pic, but I'm in hopeless love with black and white ^_~

Quite sure. ^_~ Compliments = chicken soup for the soul. Don't shirk away from them when you deserve them, Till.

Granted, but now you've eaten too many cookies and so feeling rather nauseous. I wish my Duel entry was getting churned out with a bit more rapidity.

Only two chapters behind on this? Ah, that's a relief - I thought I'd be about five pages back and buried in the dust of the first posts. ^_^ But ...

I'm sorry, but this is near impossible to read in this format. Just a tip: try to space out the dialogue and paragraphs a bit - it'll get you more ...

C'est moi! Salut, mon ami / le Diable! So I finally got to it. My list of crits was getting staggeringly long and I figured I owed you one long-overdue ...

Forgive me for taking so long to get to this, Till - still juggling a few pieces to crit, but I thought I'd get to yours first so I don't ...

*cannot refrain from laughing maniacally* I thought you gave this up, Knuckles! ^_^ I'll have to return when I've got a bit more substantial time and give you a real ...

Totally a conspiracy. ^_~ *shoves Ward No. 6 under blankets on bed* You should read The Idiot , Wiggy; I thought it was much better than War and Peace - ...